Mark R Slaughter

Smoker - Poem by Mark R Slaughter

I billowed calmly as a cloud
Upon a course for acid rain,
When in the fog of smoking crowd,
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Comments about Smoker by Mark R Slaughter

  • Rookie - 72 Points Ellen Ni Bheachain (6/17/2010 9:40:00 AM)

    Enjoyed reading your poem. Managing to stay off the cigarettes. However, reading your poem reminding me of the pleasures of smoking and all that gather in the smoking section.

    Good read! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,523 Points Marie Shine (3/23/2009 10:16:00 AM)

    A brilliant write extolling the vices of smoking.This wonderful poem SHOULD be printed on all cigarette packets - it would bring home to smokers what life entails for them if they continue with their habit. A 100 - sorry it only goes to 10 Mark, so a well deserved 10 from me. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pablo Cruise (3/17/2009 8:40:00 AM)

    A wonderful piece, Mark. I agree, more people need to read it! (Report) Reply

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