Snatched From Me Poem by Abubakar Aliyu

Snatched From Me

Rating: 5.0


Taking a deep breath with the eyes being closed.
Thinking of a precious treasure in my hand
Tight I hold, but like a red hot coal.
The heart keeps fighting silently,
The only proof is the continues weeping.
That's what happen when you realize you have no hope and cant go on.
The lost is near.. Powerless and helpless, I just let go.
Though I loose but with pride I left.
This is it; you for him and I with you, sealed it is.
That is faith, or a destiny bell. What can be done?
Then being waked from such a torturous dream, saved by the phone charging nearby.

Monday, August 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and life
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Jazib Kamalvi 15 July 2017

Impressive love story. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Brother Sadeeq 15 July 2017

I love it. Its awesome

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Kelly Kurt 22 August 2016

Nicely written and relatable. Thanks, Abubakar. (The T in snatched is missing)

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Brother Sadeeq 23 August 2016

Thanks for the T. I appriciate it.

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Abubakar Aliyu

Abubakar Aliyu

Sokoto State, Nigeria
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