Cassandra Helen


Snowglobe - Poem by Cassandra Helen

Sprinkles falling onto frozen faces
Don’t fight gravity
And other facts of life
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Comments about Snowglobe by Cassandra Helen

  • Rookie Jessica H (10/19/2005 3:38:00 PM)

    I think you have a good poem here but you need to make it more consistent. What I mean by this is you repeat the phrase “What will you give me for a dream? ”
    then you don't repeat it between the the third and fourth stanza. Consistency makes for a better poem in my personal opinion. Its good stuff though (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie maggie signaigo (4/29/2005 8:27:00 PM)

    very, very nice...i liked this one...thanks for sharing (Report) Reply








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