So.. Lonely I Feel! ! ! Poem by PRIYA GUPTA

So.. Lonely I Feel! ! !

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The days were dry
the nights were scary
with those lonely dreams & thoughts
and the eyes filled with tears & sorrow
so.. lonely i feel
so..lonely i feel

everyone else left me alone
everyone else passed by
without even noticing me
as though there was no one standing
i felt like a lonely tree in the desert
so.. lonely i feel
so..lonely i feel

i wanted someone to hold my hand
i wanted someone to wipe my tears
but all the time i was
left alone with noone to help me out
so.. lonely i feel
so..lonely i feel

i wanted to screem
i wanted to cry
but had a fake smile everytime
it was a long time i had laughed
it was a long time i had smiled
i did my best to be with this world
but every time i had failed
so..lonely i feel
so..lonely i feel! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sagar Shelar 27 February 2012

I'm agree with Unwritten Soul. The poem is musical. Every poet has his own style. Your writing style is musical. I like ur style & poem. Keep it up.........

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Jayachandran Chakrapany 26 February 2012

truly a heartbreaking poem.thank you.bye bye.jk

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Unwritten Soul 25 February 2012

It's like a song...could be nice if it has a good melody..it looks like musical lyric...and the content is good and emotional such a release from your soul..nice write_Unwritten Soul

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