Gert Strydom

Bronze Star - 2,532 Points (03 April 1964 / Johannesburg, South Africa)

So Lovely On That Morn (Balassi Stanza) - Poem by Gert Strydom

So lovely on that morn
when our kisses were born,
beauty had joy forever
and somehow we did change,
but it did not feel strange,
I wish it to be never
much different from this
a fragile kind of kiss,
the flower wilts however.


Comments about So Lovely On That Morn (Balassi Stanza) by Gert Strydom

  • Rookie - 45 Points Colleen Courtney (5/5/2014 11:11:00 AM)

    A nice piece. Wouldn't it be great if the newness and excitement of a beginning relationship could last forever? I really the beautiful way this piece is worded. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 5, 2014



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