V P Mahur

Freshman - 824 Points (Apr 16,1964 / Siyana (UP) , Bulandshahr, India)

So Many Eclipses - Poem by V P Mahur

Eclipses in Nature
You all know how they occur
But we are destined to
So many eclipses
Some full and some partial
But all having deep impact

A woman has an eclipse
When her chastity
And her souls purity
Is snatched away
By those whose dark intentions
Just want to play
With God’s holy clay

Betrayal given by friends
To serve their selfish ends
Is an eclipse
That occurs in the broad day light
And leaves us
To make a helpless fight
With our inner guilt

A love becomes an eclipse
When we are in sorrows’ grips
Trying to collect
The pieces of our soul
Made by those whom we trust
Without any reason and intellect
And our world is darkened
And burst


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Composed on March 04,2014

Comments about So Many Eclipses by V P Mahur

  • Freshman - 646 Points Maya Hanson (3/4/2014 9:07:00 PM)

    I like this! good image. thank you for commenting on my poem, Nothing's Certain! (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,018 Points Valerie Dohren (3/3/2014 4:27:00 PM)

    There are many eclipses in life, good subject for a poem, which you have expressed well. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 3, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 5, 2014


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