So Many Mary(S) And John(S) Poem by Poetheart Morgan

So Many Mary(S) And John(S)

Rating: 5.0


All Mary has your John
where you find the drink
finds the chalice too


All John is present
on feast days
to honor his sweet Mary

She is above
and Mary is your thirst

John is below
and he is her shelter

So Mary is a clear fluid
waters ~and waters under the bridge~
And John your blessing

Both of them in compassion for life

What is for her she gives to him

and for him must just ~ receive~

Liquid Mary
and become melted John!

both of them promises one to another
crying loud

But how many times
many Mary(s)
feels herself without your John

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 05 August 2013

so true Mary has her John a nice write

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Sallam Yassin 05 August 2013

economized words but emotion is high by cycle of pair- the desire and his love great piece

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Altair Laahad 05 August 2013

The fluidity in the poem is very evocative... you did it perfectly well both explicitly and implicitly... in each stanza the reader is reminded of an essential element of life that keeps John and Mary on.. drink, thirsty, liquid, fluid.. and that was the first environment for life.. beautiful poem really.. One more thing it reminded me of joao e maria, words one meets on church walls in brasil

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