Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 23,182 Points (17.03.1965)

So What! - Poem by Lyn Paul

There is always one
One Loser
We Can't all win
No Matter
What
You Have put in
So What
This world
Is a struggle
For Us all
At some point
It's the lessons
You learn
What you do with it
Is your choice
So what
Yes
It hurts
But
There are others hurting
So much harder
Yet sometimes
Those seeing wrong
Are those doing wrong
But.... So What... Just survive
Theres no.. other way
In time
They will see
Bad choices.... they have made
So What
Don't give in
You have not done wrong
Some need the power
Others just need to believe

But Hey
So what.....
You just have to survive!
And..... YOU can




Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

Topic(s) of this poem: believe, greed, hope, loss, pain


Poet's Notes about The Poem

We all know.... Every cloud has a silver lining.... NO Matter What!

Comments about So What! by Lyn Paul

  • Kanav Justa Kanav Justa (11/13/2013 4:33:00 AM)

    A great message you gave.... nicee (Report) Reply

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  • Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (10/27/2013 9:48:00 PM)

    A nice discussion with the current happenings concluding - - survival for fittest. (Report) Reply

  • Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (10/13/2013 3:51:00 PM)

    There is a balance, some one has to win, someone has to lose But the real losers are the one's that refuse to play. (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine Diane Hine (10/9/2013 7:49:00 AM)

    'you just have to survive' - true. Some days have to be tackled 5 minutes at a time. Sound advice. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George Valsa George (10/9/2013 12:22:00 AM)

    We cannot expect victory all the time! Failures and enemity from others also are sure to occur in life! Those who learn lessons from adversities and train themselves to ignore negative elements in life are sure to succeed! ! An inspiring write, Lyn! ! (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla Tirupathi Chandrupatla (10/7/2013 5:19:00 AM)

    Those seeing wrong
    Are those doing wrong
    Lof of times we see evil and ignore. No action taken it keeps rising. Beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • S.zaynub Kamoonpuri S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (10/5/2013 11:20:00 PM)

    Aha nice motivational inspirational poem ful of hope. Gud job poetess (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (10/5/2013 6:17:00 AM)

    I am have the dark cloud...no silver lining for me.....but i having golden lining with thundering shine inside..grrrrmmmm_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Nader Baheri Nader Baheri (10/5/2013 4:40:00 AM)

    i like the bitter theme flows in this poem.i add nobody wins, everybody is losing.but as u ve said struggling for it is continuing.~nb (Report) Reply

  • Pradip Chattopadhyay (10/2/2013 10:42:00 AM)

    very inspiring, Lyn, this poem reinforces the strength to survive. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 2, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 2, 2016


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