Soap And A Brush Poem by elysabeth faslund

Soap And A Brush

Rating: 5.0


To the lesser gods...
Your fingernails are dirty.
To the higher gods...
Your hair is a mess.

Why speak your mandates
To humankind, when you
Need soap and a brush?
Dare you! How dare you!

Temples can be razed.
Offerings halted.
How dare you! Give us
The blood of our loved ones

Back!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Howard 16 February 2008

People with clean nails and tidy hair can't be bothered with the complaints of the unkempt. I remember reading a very strong and justified complaint written to the source of his discontent. The recipient disdainfully pointed out the grammatical efforts and poor penmanship of the letter's author.

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Broken Peaces 11 February 2008

A very powerful write Elysabeth 10 Chris

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Ivan Donn Carswell 11 February 2008

Shades of a beggar neither bearing gifts nor seeking charity - merely making demands! Sounds blatantly political... Rgds, Ivan

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Thibodaux. Louisiana
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