Carey York

Rookie (11-27-80 / Terrell Tx)

Soft Whisper - Poem by Carey York

I was loney and scared,
Believed that no one cared,
Lost in this big world you see,
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Comments about Soft Whisper by Carey York

  • Gold Star - 6,894 Points Susan Williams (10/26/2014 1:11:00 PM)

    Yes! I love this poem's simplicity in its word choice and structure. Simplicity is powerful and its beauty is graceful. Excellent writing here. Perhaps the Holy Spirit was whispering in your ear as you put pen to paper here. (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,068 Points Babatunde Aremu (10/26/2014 12:07:00 PM)

    What a great poem! The whisper is from God through the Holy spirit. Thank God for still gentle voice. More whispering in Jesus name (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 649 Points Alem Hailu G/kristos (10/26/2014 2:41:00 AM)

    What a poem! I liked it very much.It has message and music.I wish we were friends (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,857 Points Jayatissa K. Liyanage (10/26/2014 12:58:00 AM)

    It is so inspiring and beautiful, has already started kicking inside me. Thanks very much for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,501 Points Tiku . (10/26/2013 11:04:00 AM)

    Yeah He is always there to take care.Nice drop.Liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,642 Points Soumita Sarkar (10/26/2013 10:46:00 AM)

    Good.............light of Hope can make life new..............I invite you to read my poems.Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 44,238 Points Gajanan Mishra (10/26/2013 8:36:00 AM)

    whisper in my ears, good one, thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 867 Points Liliana ~el (10/26/2013 6:44:00 AM)

    Tear-invoking; indeed filled with sorrow and a guardian angel to lift the heaviness to achieve airy peace
    Absolutely lovely! :) (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,651 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (10/26/2013 1:39:00 AM)

    Yes, God is always there for us and we are reminded of this only when hard times come...think of God in good times too, as our Saint Kabir says. Congrats on being poem of the day... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 512 Points Lenny Camacho (10/26/2013 12:31:00 AM)

    so sad and yet beautiful, so hopeful in the end (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Joyce Dilworth (10/26/2012 7:53:00 PM)

    Liked the poem.Very beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Dominic Llewellyn (10/26/2012 7:49:00 AM)

    great poem. i liked the last stanza, especially the last line When I heard the soft whisper in my ear. nice rhyme scheme (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Mark Dillon (10/26/2012 6:29:00 AM)

    Nice write Cary, inspiring to read, nicely composed. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,088 Points Hebert Logerie Sr. (10/26/2012 6:00:00 AM)

    THIS POEM IS SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL. I LIKED IT. I LOVE THE TITTLE TOO: SOFT WHISPER. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,088 Points Hebert Logerie Sr. (10/26/2012 6:00:00 AM)

    THIS POEM IS SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL. I LIKED IT. I LOVE THE TITTLE TOO: SOFT WHISPER. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,088 Points Hebert Logerie Sr. (10/26/2012 6:00:00 AM)

    THIS POEM IS SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL. I LIKED IT. I LOVE THE TITTLE TOO: SOFT WHISPER. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,088 Points Hebert Logerie Sr. (10/26/2012 6:00:00 AM)

    THIS POEM IS SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL. I LIKED IT. I LOVE THE TITTLE TOO: SOFT WHISPER. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,068 Points Babatunde Aremu (10/26/2012 1:13:00 AM)

    Only the deep call on the deep. God speaks in small still voice. The only problem is that we sedomly listen. Thank God you heard well when He spoke. Keep getting closer to Him. Good poem. I give 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 139 Points Romeo Della Valle (9/12/2011 8:51:00 PM)

    That soft voice you heard was definitely God looking after you! Well penned and poignant write! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with more of your poetic talented writes! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ... (Report) Reply










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