! ! ! ! ! ! ! *soliloquy *! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Graceful melancholy, subhendu...10. Tsira

You have unambiguously articulated in amazing poetic verses what life is all about. When melancholy disappears delight comes in. We make a stand in each stumble we made, and struggle to survive the touch of defying grace. a 10/10

leaves swaying jingling of the mango groves birds singing lush greenery rippling breeze lovely imagery could i have asked for more +++++10 anjali

The message of how life goes on is an important one to learn, and this poem describes it well. it's a great read, you've done well.

Very graphic Style of writting :)

Very descriptive, well written and thought out.

Very well written. These helps the reader understand that the world sometimes can be very unkind!

A rhythmic soul searching soliloquy with melting aliterations adding to its beauty. Enjoyed the read.

Indeed it is a meaningful soliloquy to muse over to feel the painful pleasure of life in the human world!

I'm sure young Hamlet would be inspired by your words. Colours, sounds and emotional highs and lows combine with nature to produce a work that transforms the reader. A beautiful piece. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥