Solitude Poem by John Ackerman

Solitude

Rating: 5.0


Solitude

whispers
a rain drop
quietness
seclusion
look inside we have nothing to hide
a premonition
seclusion

the woods
through the forest we see a glimmer of light
the absence of the good brings on the bad
Surrender to the force
quick conclusions will often lead the best of us astray,
the wisest move in life is but to wait
otherwise are galloping emotions run away
like horses at the gate
spirituality
alone

Solitude
Monday, June 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love,solitude
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Simone Inez Harriman 23 June 2017

I love the imagery. Well done. A beautiful poem...10+

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Rajnish Manga 19 June 2017

A subject devoted to making life better through proper evaluation of circumstances before taking a decision. It is better to ponder over all pros and cons. Highly thought provoking. Thanks. the absence of the good brings on the bad quick conclusions will often lead the best of us astray,

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 June 2017

Being spiritually alone is truly important for one to meditate, ponder and think of the things that happen everyday... A perfect 10.... You may visit my AN EVENING MEDITATION.. Thanks, John...

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Jefferson Carter 19 June 2017

John, I have a strong feeling this would be much better if you created some vivid images to carry your message. Read some good contemporary poets like Philip Levine of Mary Oliver to be guidd and inspired. if you have time, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me how you like it. Thanks! Yrs, JC

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