Some Sea-Thoughts Poem by indira babbellapati

Some Sea-Thoughts

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i saw the sea
in high pressure
or in low pressure
moderation she knows not

i saw the sea
weeping its heart out
pity, none to notice
her pain or tears

i saw the sea
stretching its parched
tongue for a dropp of water
to quench her thirst

i saw the sea
looking longingly
at the dark clouds
passing by...

i saw the sea
raising beyond her
desperate to touch
the moon beyond

i saw the sea
caressing the sky
the sky bloomed
the sea smiled

i saw the sea
in my palm
i saw the sea
in my heart
i saw the sea
in your eyes

how i wish to
be one with the sea

28sep2009
22.34hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ranjit Ravindran 04 October 2009

'i saw the sea in my palm i saw the sea in my heart i saw the sea in your eyes' Beautiful.... makes me remember Lord Krishna's words to Arjuna 'I am the biggest of biggest and the smallest of the smallest.' Do convey my wishes to our sea!

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Indira Babbellapati 28 September 2009

From: Brett Ackerman (Colorado Springs United States; Male; 44) To: Indira Babbellapati Date Time: 9/28/2009 9: 37: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: some sea-thoughts You can't deny our very essence at a micro-level.

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 29 September 2009

yes... be one with the sea, with its immensity; and yet marvel at its vastness, from afar. the very essense of existence, portrayed with a different perspective, with relation to some emotions. loved it. thank you.

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Nice thoughts about sea which represents life itself.

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Allemagne Roßmann 09 October 2009

I saw the sea stretching its parched tongue for a dropp of water to quench her thirst.......................amazing! i like it.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 06 October 2009

f a n t a s t i c---> the sea metaphor! 10+

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Pitilosi Mdala 05 October 2009

I SEE THE SEA AND ONE DAY I WANT TO BE THE SEA

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Obinna Eruchie 05 October 2009

Interesting thoughts on the sea.

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indira babbellapati

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visakhapatnam, india
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