Someone Else Poem by christine mcCherry

Someone Else

Rating: 5.0


Who would I really like to be
If I was someone else but me
Well that's a question, theres no doubt
Thats very hard to figure out.
Perhaps a younger, fitter me
with ears that hear and eyes that see
without an aid to help me so
And a boost to help me go
An artist then of great renown
A queen perhaps with golden crown
An author now, would be my choice
A writer with a powerful voice
Who'd tell of horrors caused by men
And put them right with ink and pen.

But still, if all of this were true
What would all my loved ones do?
If I was someone else, you see,
Those I love may not love me!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This question was asked of me at a recent writers group. This was my answer. If we change who we are we also change everything else.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Brown 10 October 2013

Brilliant. I love it. Well written. Great ending.

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Jigmet Angmo 03 July 2013

Ua title caught my eyes.. And m glad I read this...great work indeed..

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 03 July 2013

a fantastic theme for a poem beautifully rhymed! great work christine.

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Gajanan Mishra 03 July 2013

those I love may not love me, I like it, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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