Someone's There Poem by Deependra Kumar Jha

Someone's There

Rating: 5.0


There's nothing more fulfilling
than coming home
Even when the whole world
shuts its door on you
Someone's there
who can't wait to see you
and to hold you in embrace
Find yourself there
Fall into the sweetest of dreams
and hope no one wakes you up

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Aarella 05 July 2009

HOME.....nothing can sound as soothing and comfortable like home....and to find that loving heart in wait for us....its heaven! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! nice poem...thanks for reinforcing the concept, with this write!

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Lee Crowell 05 July 2009

i like the way you end this poem with the notion of dreaming it brings validity to the theme so that even those of us who have no one waiting at home can find a connection with you thanks for sharing

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Neha Aradhye 06 July 2009

that was so sweet one.... really...there is someone out there for you.. :) thanks for sharing! ! ! !

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Chitra - 06 July 2009

the feeling of belonging and affection well said

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Alf Hutchison 07 July 2009

A beautiful write on 'Home sweet home' well done Kumar regards Alf

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 27 October 2009

a warm embrace to be in...home sweet home

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Mohammed Albalushi 09 July 2009

yes that true, nothing like home, where u feel saftey and u always welcome, well write dear

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Jester's P 08 July 2009

it seems about faith, love and hope. faith because one believes that someone out there is meant for him/her. love because one believes that keep on loving is like planing todat and harvest the fruite tomorrow. hope because one believes that if not to day then tomorrow...and it will come in due time and in different ways.

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Jithu Varghese 07 July 2009

definitely takes a point home! ... good write.. keep writing.. god bless.. :)

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Bob Blackwell 07 July 2009

Being grateful like you write, means you are a happy person.

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