Neela Nath


Something In You - Poem by Neela Nath

There must be something in you,
That twists the land, twirls the sea;
Before you the world may be !

There must be something in you,
Which can change worn-out old things
Sprouting new leaves in dead trees!

There must be something in you,
From where seed of freedom springs;
Banning winter autumn brings!


There must be something in you,
Which has been gained by a few,
To spell all with anew hue!

There must be something in you,
To make you more than a dame,
Adds feather to cap of fame.


Comments about Something In You by Neela Nath

  • Rookie Kamal N. Baruah (7/2/2012 2:24:00 AM)

    lovely one :) barhiya lagise kobita ti (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,991 Points Valerie Dohren (6/21/2012 1:35:00 PM)

    Lovely inspired poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anush Gupta (6/18/2012 1:40:00 AM)

    Nilakshi I believe something you must have that helps U to write so nice poems.Keep on writing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 63 Points Eric Cockrell (6/16/2012 8:51:00 AM)

    love this one... there are a few who can touch the dead ground and bring forth green. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Anele The_african_son Potelwa (umbhali_wasembo) (6/16/2012 5:04:00 AM)

    How I wish there was something in me too, hahah, but this is a wonderful full of love affection write, it is within the souls of hearts, and the spirits of mind that the priviledge of recognition must be due, to this pen of yours, Great!

    The_African_Son
    (Th³_ªfR¹cª¬_šºN) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,746 Points Marieta Maglas (6/15/2012 2:55:00 PM)

    romantic and inspiring -thank you for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 37 Points Shihabudheen K J (6/15/2012 6:16:00 AM)

    really inspirational poem......feels like we can see positive energy in our beholders beyond all limits............... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points eloida Capuno (6/13/2012 10:38:00 AM)

    Beautiful! There mudt be somehing in you to be able to create such lovely poem. Im glad to have discovered your work. Thabks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie R.k Das (6/12/2012 10:24:00 PM)

    this something in you can only be found in a poet, , who can create all those things listed in the poem, stanza after stanza (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 227 Points Vipins Puthooran (6/12/2012 6:53:00 AM)

    there must be something in you..................... excellent poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Monoj Panday (6/12/2012 4:19:00 AM)

    One good poem for us, something in you.............. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Swetha Vanakayalapati (6/12/2012 12:20:00 AM)

    something in u.......Adds feather to cap of fame, something new........ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anush Gupta (6/11/2012 11:22:00 PM)

    Wow.If there is no xfactor in one's ability it is n't possible to get focused.Wonderful theme. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 354 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (6/11/2012 3:58:00 PM)

    From where seed of freedom springs;
    Banning winter autumn brings! .............................

    green sways by breeze of breath engrossing
    as newness resolves to freshness avow
    ebbing tide resiles reeling through crest
    when crescent moon fluxes to new moon, beautiful write by metaphors blazing glory to fame, wonderful tribute,10++, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sharad Juneja (6/11/2012 1:05:00 PM)

    Very nice. thr is something in you wich makes u write so well......................amazing (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,349 Points Unwritten Soul (6/11/2012 11:54:00 AM)

    Something in you i m sure get u inspired for this Something in you
    It such a commercial poetry, i mean it cool and catchy to any and grab the feeling
    at least for me :) keep wrtng_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 67 Points Urshula Davis (6/11/2012 11:39:00 AM)

    This was an awesome read! ..Great poem! Keep writing! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 11, 2012



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