Something Like This Poem by sagar patil.

Something Like This

Rating: 4.3


somehow let your eye
lashes meet with my
lashes
let all your tears
adorn my eye lashes

you have stayed with me
thru all moments + times
yes, this body sometimes far
sometimes stays close
whatever sorrow you have
tell them about me

i do not like to see
this sorrow on your face
it does not not seen possible
to have a bond of sorrow
with you

listen to my request
remove that from your
face.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this poem i write in my collage library
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 28 August 2012

Gentle, it capturing sweet moment, just like bollywood scene hahaha joking! _Unwritten Soul

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Kasia Fedyk 22 August 2012

It is a beautiful poem Sagar one that speaks of love and compassion, Beautiful!

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Payal Parande 21 August 2012

so beautiful..and romantic... One word Frees us of all the weight and pain of life: That word is love.” thanks for sharing, payal

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sagar patil.

sagar patil.

maharashtra, india
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