sagar patil.

Rookie - 2 Points (03/06/1990 / maharashtra, india)

Something Like This - Poem by sagar patil.

somehow let your eye
lashes meet with my
lashes
let all your tears
adorn my eye lashes

you have stayed with me
thru all moments + times
yes, this body sometimes far
sometimes stays close
whatever sorrow you have
tell them about me

i do not like to see
this sorrow on your face
it does not not seen possible
to have a bond of sorrow
with you

listen to my request
remove that from your
face.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

this poem i write in my collage library

Comments about Something Like This by sagar patil.

  • Veteran Poet - 1,269 Points Unwritten Soul (8/28/2012 8:04:00 AM)

    Gentle, it capturing sweet moment, just like bollywood scene hahaha joking! _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Kasia Fedyk (8/22/2012 9:23:00 AM)

    It is a beautiful poem Sagar one that speaks of love and compassion, Beautiful! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (8/21/2012 2:54:00 PM)

    so beautiful..and romantic...
    One word
    Frees us of all the weight and pain of life:
    That word is love.”
    thanks for sharing,
    payal (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 21, 2012



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