Something More Poem by TADASHA TRIPATHY

Something More



The regards and disregards
Seems alike to my ears
Except those
Which are from deepest core.

All attempts are valueless
Till the heart starts
attempting for the same.

May be my eyes
Can see more than they like
Sometime eagerness
Sometimes saturation
But still they are awaken
To see something more.

Wednesday, November 5, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Visionary
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loyd C Taylor Sr 18 November 2014

Hello poet friend Tadasha, I really enjoyed your poem and especially the ending was rather awakening and powerful, Loyd

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Buxton Shippy 18 November 2014

Thanks for sharing your thoughts and your heart with us Tadasha.

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Neela Nath Das 05 November 2014

A beautiful poem Tadasha and thanks for your comment.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 05 November 2014

But still they are awakened to see something more. Very nice expression. Excellent work shred. May God bless you Tadasha. Keep on writing.

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