Gabriella Franco (9.8.91)

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Sometimes

Sometimes, I'm a little rude, but just sometimes
Sometimes, I guess I can be creative, but just sometimes
Sometimes, I feel on top of the world, but only sometimes
Sometimes, I feel like I'm all alone, but only sometimes
Sometimes, my life is spiraling out of control, but really, sometimes
Sometimes, my heart, I swear stops beating, but then again, sometimes
Sometimes, my heart is so full it could burt, but just sometimes
Sometimes, I feel like I've got it under control, but only sometimes
Sometimes, I truly know you love me, but just sometimes
But, my love, with all of my heart, mind, and soul. Forever and for always, I'll always love you

Gabriella Franco
Submitted: Sunday, August 03, 2008


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  • Pamela Lutwyche (11/26/2008 9:13:00 AM)

    sometimes, I wonder why, and sometimes, I just don't care. I liked your poem.

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  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (8/3/2008 2:55:00 AM)

    the repetition of sometimes embellishes the whole frame all through. nive

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