True Pain


Sometimes - Poem by True Pain

Sometimes I feel alive
sometimes I feel dead
sometimes my heart hurts
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Comments about Sometimes by True Pain

  • Rookie Ashish Tyagi (4/2/2014 1:19:00 AM)

    simply explained everything that happens to everyone SOMETIMES (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Cheyenne Killion (1/9/2014 8:39:00 PM)

    I give a 10. I totally understand all of this. and its nicely written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Neha Dutt (9/23/2013 2:05:00 AM)

    A clear picture of mixed emotions, very simple and good read. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lycko Chizo (8/6/2009 9:19:00 AM)

    This is nice.10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kerry green evil becomes her (6/12/2009 5:41:00 PM)

    im new to this site i was just looking around and i came across this poem i really like it and its a poem i can relate to it it s very good and full with mix emotions which i find very good (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jane Uku (5/24/2009 9:36:00 PM)

    Sometimes, I just want to be me. Great poem, love it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jodie Pollock (1/27/2009 10:36:00 AM)

    i really liked your poem, i was able to relate to it because i have felt all of these emotions before, you know you are a true poet when you can right about the way you feel :) congratulations its really good x (Report) Reply








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