Sometimes Poem by Dbanga Guitroz

Sometimes

Rating: 5.0


Sometimes i sit and wonder do she really love me
Sometimes i sit and wonder out of all ppl WYY me
Sometimes i sit and wonder is SHE sneaking behind my back
Sometimes i sit and wonder is she really here for ME
Sometimes i sit and wonder will she ever do the things she did AGAIN
Sometimes i sit and wonder do she knw how bad she HURT me
Sometimes i sit and wonder will things EVER be the same
Sometimes i sit and wonder wht if i hurt her jst to let her feel the PAIN
Sometimes i sit and wonder do she knw i really dont want to LOSE her
Sometimes i sit and wonder wht if i change HER last name(would it be the same)
Sometimes i sit and wonder is the love the same
Sometimes i sit and wonder do she knw I changed
Sometimes i sit and wonder do she knw the love i have for her will NEVER change
Sometimes i sit and wonder would out her would my life be the SAME
Sometimes i sit and wonder is her LOVE the same
Sometimes i sit and wonder do she even pay me ANY attention
Sometimes i sit and wonder do she feel the same
Sometimes i sit and wonder do she even care
Sometimes i sit and wonder do she knw im here FOREVER
Sometimes i sit and wonder wyy do i take the pain
Thn i realize she got MY lst name
soo ikno she nt qoin no where iloveeuy

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 04 June 2011

Great poem with wonderful vivid imagery. I liked the poem for its strong structure. I rate it 10. TFS. Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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