Somewhere In Between Poem by Monica O'Connor

Somewhere In Between

Rating: 5.0


From where I stand,
I can't tell if the tide is high or low.
But I think its somewhere in between.
as is everything else.
There is a giant grey area of life,
where all unexplainable feelings are stored.
And sometimes,
you can see clear across to the other side.
And sometimes the fog clouds your pride.
or maybe you aren't letting yourself see.
Then the grey shifts directions,
to black
or white
and you make realizations
that take the grey away from you.
From where I stand, I can tell the tide is in between.
But is it coming in or going out?

5.28.2007

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lindbergh Hughes 08 March 2010

A nice, beautiful and wonderful poem! ! ! The way you described the images and how you mix them up with your ideas is great! ! Mainly the last line where we can see clearly one of the mainly points of the poem.The poet always try to see what can not be seen for normal eyes, 'cause the only eyes he uses are their imagination's eyes and how he dig it up through his words. Keep writting +10! ! ! !

0 0 Reply
Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 26 December 2009

What do you want? You want to see it coming in or going out? I promise it'll be the way you want it..: -)

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success