Patricia Grantham

Gold Star - 4,650 Points (Moncks Corner, South Carolina)

Sonnet.1/Looking For Love - Poem by Patricia Grantham

Where are you oh! my love, oh! my love?
I have searched every corner every cove
Have spent my life waiting, anticipating
Just to get a very first glimpse of you

You're the star that lights up the ebony skies
The reflection of the moon beams in my eyes
Oh! my love my love, words can never be enough
To tell you how much I long to be a part of thee

Finally, at last I have found a love so true
A love that was only meant just for me and you
I've looked for love in all the right places
Your love has solely filled all the empty spaces

You came knocking and gladly I opened the door
My love, oh! my love, having to search for you no more


Comments about Sonnet.1/Looking For Love by Patricia Grantham

  • Veteran Poet - 1,583 Points Musfiq Us Shaleheen (11/5/2013 9:11:00 PM)

    yes! this is a beautiful poem as an evergreen love song.... classic smells there... it moved me... i find myself there...very nice... thanks for sharing..... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 137 Points Rigzin Namgyal (10/7/2013 7:30:00 AM)

    ..love is a beautiful feeling..that feeling you have beautifully weaved into words..
    ..you continue writing wonderfully like this..and it will fill all the empty spaces.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 432 Points Danny Draper (10/4/2013 5:34:00 PM)

    The search for love and then sustaining it once found is always the trick, nice happy ending. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 180 Points Connie Marcum Wong (10/2/2013 10:58:00 PM)

    Dear Patricia, Love is magical and when it is enduring it is the best thing in life. I agree with the sentiments in your romantic poem. I don't have much time to comment because it hurts my eyes to be on the computer for any length of time, but just wanted you to know I received your kind comments about my poetry and I thank you very much. I also watch my little year and half old granddaughter full time, so poetry is taking a back seat right now. Blessings, Lotus (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,829 Points Amitava Sur (9/24/2013 10:27:00 AM)

    The quest & anxiety for love were detailed so nicely concluding the poem with a delight after finding the love. It's lovely in deed (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 18 Points Abhishek Mishra (9/22/2013 8:18:00 PM)

    Glorious poem indeed
    brilliant write: -) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 364 Points Joseph Anderson (9/19/2013 12:32:00 PM)

    Looking for love in all the right places. A glorious and uplifting sonnet to love. Take a bow.
    Is remindful of sonnets from the days of yore-A beaui=10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 107 Points Efe Benjamin (9/18/2013 1:52:00 PM)

    the beauty of love is perfectly defined in this poem, anticipating love, patiently waiting, hoping earnestly, surely I enjoyed reading this (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 24,881 Points Valsa George (9/14/2013 11:23:00 AM)

    'Finally, at last I have found a love so true
    A love that was meant just for me and for you'

    The self satisfied tone of having found your true love is ringing loud in these lines. So you both are now two souls with a single thought and two hearts that beats as one! A beautiful love sonnet! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,607 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/13/2013 12:13:00 PM)

    Your love has solely filled all the empty spaces. Beautiful love poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,714 Points Neela Nath (9/13/2013 9:45:00 AM)

    So nice Pat.Mesmerizing diction and well-knitted structure! 10+++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 13, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, October 18, 2013


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