Sonnet 14: Oh, What Wonderful Music We Did Make Poem by David Wood

Sonnet 14: Oh, What Wonderful Music We Did Make

Rating: 5.0


Oh, what wonderful music we did make
When we danced happily the night away.
Those sweet memories are for my keep sake
And will stay in my mind never to stray.
When days were longer than the time we had
And long summer days shone with bright sunlight
Made my dear heart sing and made me so glad
That my sweet heart’s love shone so very bright.
But that Time’s hour glass has now run out
And Death’s sickle gleaming in the night hour
Separating our joined hearts with a clout
Taking you to much higher power.
Now our sweet love is an unbroken chain
That binds our two hearts till we meet again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 25 May 2013

sweet love unbroken chain. good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment and vote.

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Shahzia Batool 25 May 2013

Yes, a neat sonnet, and the spirit of acceptance of the Divine order is evident by the image of unbroken chain, the theme of Death paints the poem in gray shades but it's positive with an assurance of meeting again for the timeless eternity!

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Those sweet memories... will stay in my mind never to stray Yet another sonnet takes one to the realm of love.

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Spiritual Seeker 29 May 2013

Another great piece...memories, golden memories stays fresh and stronger.

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Dave Walker 27 May 2013

A great poem, the memories stay forever.

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Unwritten Soul 26 May 2013

Dance with the melodic rhymes and words, in a softly touch to my ears...just dance_Soul

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Valerie Dohren 25 May 2013

Great sonnet again David. Well penned as always.

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Paul Brookes 25 May 2013

Another great sonnet 10/10 BB : O)

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