Sonnet For You Poem by Adshaya Mahendran

Sonnet For You

Rating: 4.8


I'm passing over the sky
Towards golden twilight
You are a harmful spy
Who knew my day and night

You are reaching me as a wave
When I need your heart
You move from me and save
I know bebe u r so smart

We are the migrating birds
Flying here and there
You are treating me a third
My tears are sweating my hair

Memories are around me as a bee
Will you come over the sky for me? ? ? ? ?

Sonnet For You
Saturday, July 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Memories of my beloved
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A sting and significant sonnet my friend!

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Adshaya Mahendran 16 July 2015

thank u @Howard

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Creative ending to this lovely poem!

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Adshaya Mahendran 16 July 2015

thank u so much @Howard

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Chinedu Dike 05 July 2015

A well articulated 14-line piece of poetry, nicely penned in Shakespearean sonnet rhyme scheme. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON, also graced with Shakespearian sonnet rhyme scheme.

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Adshaya Mahendran 05 July 2015

thank u so much and sure i'll read your poem

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Kelly Kurt 04 July 2015

A lovely sonnet, Adshaya. Thanks for sharing Peace

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Adshaya Mahendran 05 July 2015

thank u so much @Kelly Kurt

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