Neela Nath


Sonnet: To A Tormenting Soul - Poem by Neela Nath

I hail, the good soul of this earth,
Let the fire less burn in me;
I may not get the home and hearth,
May not rejoice life in glee.
I can't keep love in iron chest,
Forlorn you feel me betrayer;
Your pure love was not seen the best.
My heart can't be the savior;
Love, love the words that tell of heart,
Love the soul that wrapped with tear;
You might not know tormenting part,
That steps back home out of fear!
I've kept one secret box in it,
Your heart and mine together beat!


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(Rhyme scheme: ab, ab, cd, cd, ef, ef, gg)

Comments about Sonnet: To A Tormenting Soul by Neela Nath

  • Gold Star - 14,840 Points * Sunprincess * (12/14/2013 4:13:00 PM)

    very impressive rhyming scheme....and it is nicely written with beautiful ending lines :)
    ~I've kept one secret box in it,
    Your heart and mine together beat! ~ (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 34 Points Ramdas Bhandarkar (5/22/2012 10:44:00 AM)

    very good plot and rythem with Roaming thoughts! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie R.k Das (5/19/2012 2:05:00 AM)

    this sonnet is poignant and one can read it any number of times, thanx (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 16, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 16, 2012


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