Mariah Whitfield

Rookie (12-7-90 / Lakeview Hospital)

Sorrow - Poem by Mariah Whitfield

sorrow can leave you spending in a frame
with so much gulit and pain
sorrow was taken as a game
but it's so much more than and emotion
it's a pain
love brings sorrow in the game
it's like a pain calling your name
sometimes that come and never goes away
sorrow is based on a fear
sorrow is a secret you hold near
sorrow can hurt based on if it's a fear
but thats basically why sorrow found you here

Comments about Sorrow by Mariah Whitfield

  • Rookie Jackson Olagunju (1/5/2013 1:01:00 AM)

    It is good, ..i love it..keep it up and i kp up reading (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Jackson Olagunju (1/5/2013 1:00:00 AM)

    It is good, ..i love it..keep it up and i kp up reading (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarah Mohyla (12/8/2012 2:07:00 PM)

    I love this poem! I think you did an awesome job describing sorrow :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Flyingsquirrel Flyingsquirrel (5/29/2012 10:45:00 AM)

    This is awesome poem. I think you did a good job on this poem and remind me of sorrow. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Melissa Jamison (7/23/2009 5:57:00 PM)

    Good job i loved it but watch out around the first line you write and not an. Silly mistake: S haha but it was a great poem and if you would like you could read mine. My poet name is everlasting nightmare...but please keep writing you area amazing! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 21, 2009

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