Sorrow Poem by Mariah Whitfield

Sorrow

Rating: 3.9


sorrow can leave you spending in a frame
with so much gulit and pain
sorrow was taken as a game
but it's so much more than and emotion
it's a pain
love brings sorrow in the game
it's like a pain calling your name
sometimes that come and never goes away
sorrow is based on a fear
sorrow is a secret you hold near
sorrow can hurt based on if it's a fear
but thats basically why sorrow found you here

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jackson Olagunju 05 January 2013

It is good, ..i love it..keep it up and i kp up reading

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Jackson Olagunju 05 January 2013

It is good, ..i love it..keep it up and i kp up reading

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Sarah Mohyla 08 December 2012

I love this poem! I think you did an awesome job describing sorrow :)

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This is awesome poem. I think you did a good job on this poem and remind me of sorrow.

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Melissa Jamison 23 July 2009

Good job i loved it but watch out around the first line you write and not an. Silly mistake: S haha but it was a great poem and if you would like you could read mine. My poet name is everlasting nightmare...but please keep writing you area amazing!

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