Up apon the steep cliff, a mansion high.
A barren road that runs, near by. In the
back ground, the dark colors of the sky.
Telling the aura, of the castles time. Down
below.. The waves crash and flow.. To the
rhythm of the songs played long ago.. Dancing
on soft, and slow..The shadows of the stories
told..Open our hearts, , hear their souls, , and
feel what they know..
Wonderful imaginary and imagery. A captivating scene has been captured euphoniously. The sunset, oceanic sound, and dance of waves enthral everybody. Beautiful poem I appreciate it.
Thank You! ! ! Kumarmani, For Your Kind! ! ! ! ! And Beautiful Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is Breathtakingly Moving! ! ! ! ! And Ever So Beautifully Inspirational! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! !
The imagery, the atmosphere you brought here is so nice, when i read halfway i start to imagine with oceanic sound on sunset yellow background to blue night...i like it!
Thank You! ! ! Soul, For Such A Beautifully Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! :) Your Poetry Is So Spiritually Beautiful! ! ! ! ! And Inspiring To All! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !
A vivid scene clearly sketched by your words, Rebecca. Where was this?
Thank You! ! ! Honored By Your Visit And Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Sometimes... when listening to music, I close my eyes and visions/dreams/feelings, , different from whats playing..pass by, sometimes outside or reading too. Your Poetry Is So Wonderfully Amazing To Feel...To Read...You Are An Inspiration To All! ! ! ! ! ..The Stars And The Seas! ! ! ! ! :) Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! ! And Hope You Got To Have A Wonderful... Vacation! ! ! ! ! Not sure I found the same video on Gazzels..But led me to many Heart warming! ! ! ! ! Other ones on Hippo's and their babies! ! ! ! ! Ever So Wondrous! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much Again! ! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
..Open our hearts, , hear their souls, , and feel what they know......maxmimum! Liked the setting of the poem, background, imagery and finally the precision. Top score.