Souls Stretching Endless In The Sky (Choka) Poem by Harindhar Reddy

Souls Stretching Endless In The Sky (Choka)

Rating: 4.5


Heavenly bliss: Just
follow nature’s hallo, hug
the trees, feel the breeze –
know stars live in galaxies:
oh! those little lamps
in multi colours, gosh! in
between lives black holes:
our dead souls stretching endless
n the sky, hear to
sheep’s tong-ting, swim in the blue
seas then universe
open doors for you even
by cracking walls and
shaping your soul – Or visits
tsunami with a gift, death!

Sunday, March 23, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: stars
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Choka is a forms of waka

Repetition of 5 and 7 on phrases, with a last phrase containing 7 on.

Syllable count: 5-7-5-7-5-7...5-7-7
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Harindhar Reddy

Harindhar Reddy

Haliya, Hyderabad, India
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