Sounds Poem by Sandra Osborne

Sounds

Rating: 3.1


The pat, pat, pat,
Of falling rain,
A radio's quiet reflection,
A small scared dog,
Wet, wanting to come in.

The sounds are woven
Within my life,
Like an old hemp rope,
With each strand frayed,
To sound my existence.

A chorus of strings,
Echoes from the past.
The gusting wind,
Of dual reality,
The rushing sounds,
Of love and fate.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Astral Shepherd 04 January 2005

wonderful assonance, gentle word soundings of a rainy day. really, this should be read aloud for its full impact on the soul. Blessings and best wishes, ~richard

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Herbert Nehrlich1 22 December 2004

This is a 10 and it is pleasing to the ear, too. H

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Allan James Saywell 22 December 2004

A nice quiet poem concerned with sound, very well done sandra short poems can say more then long poems, with more power Regards AJS

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