Speaking Out Poem by Romeo Della Valle

Speaking Out

Rating: 5.0


Please, take me home,
I remember the address
And I am sure the place
Where happiness rests my price.
I knew all along,
I suppose, I stayed away,
I could not believe
That you wanted me to stay….

It preserved expectancy
To delay awhile
The distance of not knowing
Might change a tired mind…
I wanted to be prepared
But I’ll never be!
What does ‘ready’ have to do
With intimacy?

But really, I am out of chips,
This is my last deal,
One cannot continue to play
Against the rules…
Short little sputtering phrases
Do query express
Making one wonder
But I can not longer guess…

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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Copyright ©2013
New York City
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Louis Cecile 29 July 2013

A nice flow and open end with questions to make one think deeply. The sense of doubt and then understanding is nicely played out.

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Leaking Pen 25 July 2013

Dear Romeo With so much fire and passion in your belly, any girl would be lucky to have you, not only you are a poet par excellance, but a true musician at heart, and who can say no to beautiful music in its almost pure form, nature has blessed you with a gifted spirit, your way is from the spiritual world, sooner or later, your love will transcend to you level and come around Truly Paul(Leaking Pen)

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Ramesh Rai 11 July 2013

beautiful flow expression confession as a person with true heart and soul. beautiful write dear brother regards

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Heather Wilkins 10 July 2013

Sometimes we must speak out. Glad to see you posting again dear romeo. good read

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