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..i was caught unaware...
..was too timid but for her did i gulp the fear..
..when she spoke i quivered... body went numb as i shivered..
..but still i gathered courage and dared..
..because i wanted her to know how much i cared..
..her words that showered with care...
..i felt ' special ' for the secrets she did share..
..when she spoke about her past... heart started beating very fast.. time went by it started to unfold..
..she was the 'one' with a heart of gold..
..for her i was ready to face the guillotine..
..endure whatever even if my heart did whine...
..though i knew i was nothing less than a swine.. her i started seeing the shades of my ' valentine '.. past relationships have been a sham..
..don't want this ' special ' one to slam..
...that's why we are the best of friends..
...i will let her know wen my search ends...
..until that moment in the darkness do i grope..
..what keep me going is a mirage called ' hope '..
..i ask this the beginning of something to bloom..
.. see the clouds clearing and the death of gloom..
..but i will always live with one biggest regret..
..that is the sin i committed of making her ' wait '..
;) :) : (

Submitted: Wednesday, April 04, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, September 03, 2013

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  • Tanya Engel (2/22/2013 4:35:00 AM)


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  • Patricia Grantham (2/11/2013 8:03:00 AM)

    Well written and really felt the love pains. Thanks

  • Neela Nath (11/28/2012 12:23:00 AM)

    Well rhymed fantastic poem. Enigmatic is the tune of love and veiled is your lady love.. A nice poem.

  • * Sunprincess * (10/10/2012 7:39:00 AM)

    wow this is a really nice poem..thanks for sharing!

  • Herojit Philem (5/9/2012 4:55:00 AM)

    Very nice............... Well joted

  • Vijay Sai R (4/4/2012 11:24:00 PM)

    really so special...nice poetic rhythm

  • Ramesh Rai (4/4/2012 6:18:00 AM)

    somethng spl. i like your poem

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