vaibhav shah

Rookie (07-12-1984 / Dungarpur (Rajasthan))

Spring And Autumn - Poem by vaibhav shah

Today the night seems to be a burden
In a mood of bitter reflection
Troubled by an unknown venture
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Comments about Spring And Autumn by vaibhav shah

  • Rookie - 0 Points Deepti Agarwal (4/22/2008 2:36:00 AM)

    now this is called the way one looks at the thinfs... u did a good job by looking at autumn soo beautifully.... so many had written about spring(including me) but very few on autumn... good work! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie K. V. Venkataramana (3/30/2008 10:58:00 PM)

    You have beautifully expressed why Autumn is preferable to Spring in your poem. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Abha Sharma (3/21/2008 9:00:00 AM)

    this takes you to the line of Hopkins and other classic poet........remember hopkins 'Spring and Fall'
    a good one.... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,205 Points Seema Chowdhury (3/12/2008 11:25:00 PM)

    Hi Vaibhav well come to poemhunter. thanks for sending your comments on my poem. i really appreciate. i read your poem it is good, but always remember if there was no insentive and motivation we would all have died. life is made up of pains and gains, otherwise we wouldn't have appreciated the gains. take care
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  • Rookie Kay Bressner (3/10/2008 12:24:00 PM)

    I like how you prefer Autumn over Spring. (Report) Reply

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