Spring Chill [haiku] Poem by Jennifer Colyne Hall

Spring Chill [haiku]

Rating: 5.0


Spring chill comes alive -

a sun kissed flame dances bright

again for one day...

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
my first Haiku poem - (now) 5,7,5 - revised
she is thrilled because it seems poverty has been lifted for a day
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Walterrean Salley 19 September 2014

A lovely haiku. Very good for your first one. Love the springtime. Can feel that last chill.

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