Valsa George


Stack Of Wealth - Poem by Valsa George

What wealth for man to fare
The gift of power, the will to dare
Wit so sharp and insights rare
A heart to share and a soul to care

A marvelous thing of joy and pain
The prime motif in God’s divine design
Bestowed with intelligence to discern
And light like a candle to burn

In kingly glory he stands erect n’ tall
Over all animals that beneath him crawl
Blessed generously with copious gifts and skills
And discretion to ward off all sinister ills

Though here on Earth, uncrowned he be
He is the royal prince of the life to be
And legal heir to celestial glee
After his perilous voyage across the sea


Comments about Stack Of Wealth by Valsa George

  • Gold Star - 32,966 Points Akhtar Jawad (12/5/2014 4:40:00 AM)

    when a heart shares pains and smiles of others and his soul really cares it, the owner of that heart becomes a beloved of God...........10 (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 4,909 Points Patricia Grantham (9/30/2013 8:15:00 AM)

    Beautiful just beautiful. Another deep penetration to the soul, mind and
    heart. There is one that is greater than you and I. He holds the key to
    our future and can unlock any door. Great is He our God. Very nice
    Madam Valsa! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 750 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (9/22/2013 11:19:00 AM)

    An incomparable poem with beauty and magnificence with music flowing endears the readers.
    Wonderful, brilliant and amazing! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/22/2013 2:05:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem with the nature of human and the beauty of divine delightful to heart and mind thank you (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,376 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/21/2013 7:58:00 AM)

    Beautifully penned poem. Heart to share and soul to care. What more? Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points David Wood (9/21/2013 5:19:00 AM)

    A delightful poem that rhymes and flows well. I like it. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,698 Points Anthony Di''anno (9/20/2013 1:58:00 PM)

    Gorgeous. I love the rhyming and the flow. Really nice :) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,913 Points Dave Walker (9/19/2013 4:12:00 PM)

    A wonderful flowing poem, a great write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 394 Points Joseph Anderson (9/19/2013 12:53:00 PM)

    Love it and love your skill with rhyme. Beautiful thoughts and deftly presented. Your devoutness
    comes shining through (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,083 Points Heather Wilkins (9/19/2013 12:26:00 PM)

    lovely poem. the last stanza tells the story nice (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,393 Points Tajudeen Shah (9/18/2013 12:27:00 PM)

    Man, his worth, here and after within such a cute, beautiful shell have you concealed! Your faith is sure to turn an intellectual epidemic, if not a pandemic. Matters that digest on certain brains wont even crawl near to innocent contexts of simple stories. Naturally unnatural are such instances of life. I am sure to read and write again. pls allow me another reading. Regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 7 Points Neethu Prasanna (9/18/2013 2:23:00 AM)

    Excellent poem! As always I like this too......

    I have added a new poem. If you have time gimme feedback (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 432 Points Danny Draper (9/18/2013 1:42:00 AM)

    Rich imagery and sentiment to lovingly support devout faith. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/17/2013 9:14:00 AM)

    Perhaps man is the superior to all and we must care the other fellow living thank (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,041 Points Lyn Paul (9/17/2013 8:31:00 AM)

    Wealth comes in many different forms. Well written Valsa (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,229 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/17/2013 6:39:00 AM)

    Fantastic poem Valsa. I might have read more than once to get its proper meaning. Here on the earth, he is uncrowned king and legal heir to amass wealth.But at the last where he stands? It's true many of them don't think about that..Its often seems that death is too far away from their view..loved the way you presented it. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Dinesh Nair (9/17/2013 4:31:00 AM)

    But where is his tribe and isn`t he often standing alone? Poor man. We have no magical power to stop his aging and If he is going to be rewarded with the celestial glee later, deep down in his mind he will remain sad like Oscar Wilde`s [un]happy prince! Who will rescue him then? The Designer cannot see that angle.
    The poem scores high in language used and format applied. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,451 Points Kavya . (9/17/2013 4:12:00 AM)

    an excellent write........yes God is the ultimate decision maker (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,543 Points Gajanan Mishra (9/17/2013 12:57:00 AM)

    thing of joy and pain, good write, (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 17, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 17, 2013


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