~stand Still With Me~~ Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

~stand Still With Me~~

Rating: 5.0


...Of all the moments, that i could ever savor,
This TIME, it would be spent with you-
Courting our: High Esteem, together,
Dressed up in love, are we two...

You know what i mean don't you?
Someone to: 'Stand Still' in TIME with, in the rain?
Or to braise our naked bodies under the sun,
With SomeOne, to erase, the daily pain?

I do believe that with you-
That the seconds and minutes will show,
That: 'Standing Still' together-
Will make a way, for sweet love to grow!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew mark Wilkinson 31 August 2007

Reminds me of the song... Has Long as you stand by me.. Theo Great poem Lady

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Theodora Onken 31 August 2007

Andy, As always, thank you. Your words of encouragement are so appreciated! I do not believe i have read one negative word from you on this site! Blessings and wishes To you and Sarah! Theo

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Indira Babbellapati 31 August 2007

'standing still together...' what a nice feeling!

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Theodora Onken 01 September 2007

Joanne, Please, Please, cheer up! Living life, we learn to face and deal with the sad and the mean! Look at the problem i am dealing with! My poem: Famous Yet, identifies my problem...and i still do not allow for it to get me down. Criminals, and their CANT, well, lets just say i turned it over to God, and God turned it over to the authorities. The more he writes, the more they know! Now, i know that you are sad, and i am not sure why, but please, take a moment to breathe and reflect inwardly and then let God! Thank you sweetie for your praise! Love Ya! Theo

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JoAnn McGrath 31 August 2007

This one was a nice one of your poems to start with on my return...wish I could feel that way again...sounds wonderful

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Theodora Onken 31 August 2007

Thank you dear Marci, and Margaret! It can happen for anyone...in reality or in fantasy, as using the imagination sometimes is a good thing. And sometimes if you think about things enough, you find, at least i have that the thoughts, actually do come true! XXOO, Theo

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x... x... 31 August 2007

My oh my now 'wouldn't this be loverly? ' as the song states. Goodness I hope it's happening for you. sometimes, enough of the 'cold spell' say I. [ps>>39 yrs. would have been, only made it through exactly ten] This is a beautiful poem Theodora. ~~marci.xoxo~~

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Margaret Alice 31 August 2007

A love that consists of cameraderie, being buddies, sharing the routine of life, cherishing friendship and confidence - yes, always Theo! 'That: 'Standing Still' together-' Will make a way, for sweet love to grow! ' Lovely sentiments, thank for the expression in this poem; Kind regards, Margaret.

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