Standing On The Beach Poem by Scott Austin

Standing On The Beach

Rating: 5.0


Standing On The Beach


We are standing on the beach
Watching the sunset slowly go down
With this slow blowing breeze
and waves rolling across our feet

With you standing so ever close
You in front and me just behind
With our hands so ever inter twined

With your hair blowing in my face
It smelling so ever saccharine
I loosen one hand reach up
And pull your hair aside

Then I lean my head so ever slightly
Towards your sweet smell neck
Then I begin to lightly kiss it
from top to bottom

I can notice the chill bumps
Across your exposed skin
You moan so ever slightly
As to give your approval

You softly curse my head
As to want me to continue
This so ever lightly kissing of the neck

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Gale 05 October 2006

Beautiful, so loving..a kiss that sends the chills.

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Whitney Nicole Albright* 15 December 2008

Great imagery in this poem. You made me feel like I was there. Moments like these are perfect! Thanks, Whitney

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Marvin Brato 01 April 2008

Splendid write, it made me reminisce the moments I stood on the beach with my beloved wife MILIZA the time we made a vow to love each other. The panoramic recollection makes the poetry very romantic. Thank for sharing, a 10.

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Keiromi Nozomu 12 July 2007

wow. that was absolutely wonderful. beautiful poetry.

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Hailey Corege 04 July 2007

Truely amazing...This peom, you can just picture it all in your mind...Makes me smile...

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Raul Castelan 07 June 2007

I have often tried to write poetry of the beach, and you have captured it. Splendid job, I say.

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