Stardust Reverie Poem by David Harris

Stardust Reverie

Rating: 4.8


Everyone wants to be famous,
seeing their name in lights
and their star shining bright.
A few actually do see
their star shine bright
and then fade away
sending them back into obscurity.
While other's stars burn bright
for almost an eternity.
Some stars even burn brighter posthumously,
and each them collecting
a bit of the stardust reverie.

2 June 2014

Monday, June 2, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: miscellaneous
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Well-written poem. I think perhaps you might want to have the posthumously on a separate line by itself (just a thought) . Also, in the second to the last line, I think there should be an of before them: and each of them. Loved it.

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David Harris

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