Stars Poem by cherassery damodaran binish

Stars

Rating: 4.3


Stars, shining in the sky....
Candles lit in the houses
Of the angels up above high
Giving hope to our senses.
Angels live in the minds
Of those who are in need
And tired of never lasting greed
Where men with a heart at last finds.
Stars..., the shining ray of hope
Will last long even after the flood
That takes all with a full stop
And all that remains is only the human greed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 11 December 2011

[Greed of man is incurable] A g'd poem! ! !

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Vipins Puthooran 11 December 2011

[Greed of man is incurable] A g'd poem! ! !

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 18 December 2011

Wow! brilliant write man, , the greed of man never stops, its an incurable cancer..

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Mandira Chattopadhyay 01 January 2012

nice poems, always harp on human greed. hammer at our conscience

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 04 January 2012

you are right stars that shine bring hope they inspire us nice poem

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 18 March 2012

wonderful verse! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I love it very much. strong words and beautiful meaning! Bravo!

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Silverinna Annastasia 17 March 2012

Strong words, my friend. Well done.

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Tanyarose Poemsandwoes 13 January 2012

Love it! It started out, I wasnt sure where it was leading, but I followed, and feel I ended up at a pot of gold, thanks for sharing! I belive youd enjoy my poem about gred & war- I wrote it yesterday, cant remeber what I titled it....

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Dave Walker 07 January 2012

Sadly human greed will always remain. Great poem.

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Kaia Grønnbæck 06 January 2012

I liked this poem very much. Thank you for sharing it!

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