Starting Over Poem by Ashley Root

Starting Over

Rating: 4.3


I dream of a land far away from here,
Without any troubles, pain or fears.
In this place I would be happy and free,
Without anyone to criticize or hassle me.
No more worries and no more tears,
Living in a world that I could grow throughout the years.
Surrounded by clear blue skies and oceans that go on for miles,
Filling my life with priceless laughter and cherished smiles.
I don't know if this place exists or if I'll ever make it there,
I just know that I can't follow my dreams here.
I want to be successful and live my life to the fullest,
I want to be admired and labeled the best.
I'm petrified to be a failure and amount to nothing,
All of my hard work has got to pay off for something.
If I could move away and start over again,
I'm certain that I could make my amends.
I'll work my hardest and hopefully make it to this place,
And live with no cares and nothing but plenty of space.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mask Hernandez 09 August 2007

That was nice, I guess thats everyone's dream.To run away from there problems, but it was nice and I give you a 7.Keep up the good work!

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