' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' Statue In The Rain Poem by Dónall Dempsey

' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' Statue In The Rain

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STATUE IN THE RAIN

I stand
like a statue in the rain.

The house
looks dumbly at me.

Its two windows
& its door

like a giant
human face

staring stupidly
at me.

I gaze
blankly back.

Suddenly the light
has gone from its eyes

you emerge
all dressed in red

as if the door
had stuck its tongue out.

A stranger
(to me)

but obviously
(not to you)

appears & kisses you.

You kiss him
passionately back.

You told me
you were seeing your Mum.

He looks
nothing like your Mum.

I stand
like a statue in the rain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Callie Carroll 01 February 2010

Some images are quite striking. I wonder what the effect would be if you left out the 'mum' part the let the rest speak for itself. Regards, Cal

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Dónall Dempsey

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Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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