Stay Clean Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Stay Clean

Rating: 5.0


Many come in our lives
Some of them catches eye
Some will touch our heart
Some will move our lives
And moves away from life

Many words they will say
Words that make us smile
And as well as to cry
Even if its true or not
Heart will tie a knot

Many promise they do
Few do just for sake
Few do only to break
Few go far to make
Only to knew its fake

Many memories they give
Memories good to cheer
Also painful to share
It makes life hard
By being lives part

So it’s not sunshine
Nor it’s a rainbow
Life is really mean
It makes us to lean
But move on staying clean

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Janell Cressman 16 June 2009

wow, it is an amazing poem! ! ! !

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rago rago 16 June 2009

fine and you have penned well.............

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you put across your stand well

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nive message you have enveloped here

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 17 June 2009

Very good Kranthi. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

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Antonio Liao 02 March 2010

It’s a HOPE hummer in the shadow, of the soul...I do like to internalized this Poem...beautifully pen...God bless.... a 10+

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Catrina Heart 18 June 2009

Stunning thoughts to share...well written poem..10+++

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Louis Rams 17 June 2009

your mind has to stay clean so that your heart can see, all that was meant to be. a good write a ten

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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 June 2009

'So it’s not sunshine Nor it’s a rainbow Life is really mean It makes us to lean But move on staying clean' The whole poem is nice and beautiful. We could learn.10+++

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Shashendra Amalshan 17 June 2009

i know sir......sometimes i feel so bad when i see other people enjoying life....cause for me it s so hard to move on....this is nice poem about the movie of life...most times it is filled with tragedy...wonder whether there are happy endings in life....! ! ! ! nice sir10++ regards shan

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