Staying Alive Poem by Broken Angel

Staying Alive

Rating: 5.0


Im so tired of this life
But i choose to live it
I choose to live it cuz it's the right thing to do
It's the right thing to do
Cuz people know i'll get better
And i'll pull through
Yet sometimes i feel as if i can't go on
Then all your beliefs pull me through
Sometimes i feel so alone, like no one understands
Yet again you come asure me that im not alone
That you do understand what im dealing with and feeling.
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written: 9/15/05

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mickey Pig Knuckles 16 January 2006

Oh Ashley, once again I have this wonderful chance to expose myself to your poetic brillence and this one was packed full of meaningful emotions from you as the creative author. I just want you to know that I truly admire your glowing poetic style and now this is twice you have managed to make me smile. You are awesome. Thank You once again for sharing your wonderful words of art and especially for giving me and your other readers a little more of you as we hunger for lots more. Reading your words of poetry is such a wonderful pleasure and its great as you have given us another portic treasure. Your Number One Reading Fan, Mickey Pig Knuckles :)

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