* Stealing A Kiss * Poem by Kay Barcelon

You write a beautifully romantic poem with a real sense of the wonder of love. I also personally love seeing the word smitten in a poem, we need to use that luscious word more often.

Definitely more preferable than waking up in the basement, being whacked by bamboo sticks while suspended by your ankles.: O) Seriously, nice work!

Kay readign your poem more than the romantic sense that it has I feel a taste of harmony. It's about how life can be beautiful too. 'One thing we share it's an ideal of beauty' says an old song. and that's what I feel about it.

your words have the power to create the scene for the reader.i really felt that gentle touch of love.depecting love in a different way is most welcome...keep writing

Very beautiful Kay I almost pictured the whole scene, though the characters were different the out come was the same! ! Séamus