Stepping Out Of The Shadows.. Poem by Nathan Charles

Stepping Out Of The Shadows..

Rating: 4.0


Stepping out of the shadows to feel the warmth of the light.
To come to an understanding of leaving a lose/lose situation,
and yet feel victorious.

The heart slowing down... thoughts are getting focused. To only
understand the true love I have is called freedom.

The freedom to walk around without stumbling.
The freedom to feel the wind in my face.
The freedom to think about my short past, and my long future.
The freedom to enjoy my life with a view of clarity.
The freedom to count the milage on my long motorcycle rides.
The freedom to count on my friends and never fear.
The freedom to understand some peoples mistakes.
The freedom to walk away and never worry.

Into the light I walk..a new vision.. a new life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 10 September 2008

I recommend this because it has a message I like. I can't say the presentation of this piece is the best and the structure is not exactly to my liking, but these are minor things compared to the message. Although these things could have caused it to suffer. It got by without damage. GW62

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Hopeu Likadapoem 09 September 2008

You say it all, but so few will truly understand, , Great write! !

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