Still Numerous Poem by Catrina Heart

Still Numerous



By the glowing eels in the sea
Barracuda swam across the reefs
Unthreatened from the water squall
Unspoiled from withdrawn zeal and ardor
Serene by the tides appealing offer
Constant he to school proverbs –
Still numerous to lure for a sweet angel!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 18 October 2009

The wording is so wonderful Nice poetic piece....

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Ramesh T A 19 October 2009

Thought kindling nice little poem!

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Kesav Easwaran 19 October 2009

enigmatic...your poem and the barracuda both...an affair deep (taking place beneath sea) well told...10

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Anand Madhukar 19 October 2009

Enigmatic indeed! Can be interpreted at multiple levels.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 October 2009

Let me swim accross the zero... Beautiful...

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Beautifully descriptive writing Catrina and with a commendable theme. Loved it! 10 Karin

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2009

Barracuda swam across the reefs Unthreatened from the water squall Unspoiled from withdrawn zeal and ardor Serene by the tides appealing offer.....lovely poem and it is beautiful to swim across unthreatened.....i loved the theme....10

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Raj Arumugam 23 October 2009

a lovely poem well-crafted with its nature imagery

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this is good.. can i be the ell? i always wanted to 'shine my light'

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 20 October 2009

obscurity is there. contents are new. shan

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