Still Smiling........ Poem by Apurva Jain

Still Smiling........

Rating: 5.0


Smiled When Mother Took Me Into Her Arms For The First Time,
Smiled When Saw World Outside The Hospital For The First Time,
Smiled Whenever Went To School,
Smiled Even Being Laughed At....
And Called A Fool....
Smiled When Stood First In The Class,
Smiled When I Wasn't Misunderstood..... At Last!
Smiled When My Poem Was Said Wow!
Smiled When Realised That Only Day Is Today....
And Time Is Now......
Smiled When Got My 'True' Love,
Smiled As I Always Felt We Are Two Doves,
Smiled Even When Came To Know He's Not Mine,
Smiled Even When He Married My Friend.....
And Raised A Toast Of Wine,
Smiled Even When Lost Every Hope,
Smiled Even When Wasn't Able To Cope,
Smiled Even When Knew My End Is Near,
Smiled And Enjoyed Cutting My Nerve.......
No Fear...............
Smiled At Every Moment Of My Life,
Whenever, Wherever And Never Cried.............

But Now, I'm Lying Under A White Cover,
Father Putting Me On Fire.........
With No Blessings Left To Shower.....
People Around Have Nothing To Do With My Death
But Are Crying.........
And I'm............
Still Smiling.................................

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I'm still smiling and was smiling through the whole poem.... Its a fantastic poem.... I can see a little signs of gothic poetry.... And its somewhat similar to my poem, but i never cried, i've used the negative word cried with the word never and made it positive and u've used a positive word smiled.... But ur poem is far better than mines.... :)

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Lady Grace 31 December 2009

smile tho my heart is aching.... smile even everything went wrong...smile..just smile..it will be fine...

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