Valerie Dohren

Gold Star - 4,678 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Stolen (Lost Poem Retrieved) - Poem by Valerie Dohren

You took all the words from my lips
And left me with nothing to say
Then stole the bright sun from my sight
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

This is about what life can do, not a person.

Comments about Stolen (Lost Poem Retrieved) by Valerie Dohren

  • Gold Star - 36,605 Points * Sunprincess * (1/4/2014 12:21:00 PM)

    ................oh this is a wonderful theme and I enjoyed it very much...I thought someone had stolen your poem...but I am glad you left me the poet's note...a very nice write... (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,215 Points Walterrean Salley (4/25/2013 7:50:00 AM)

    Thanks for this revealing poem, Val, which shows exactly what life can do. Well crafted. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 972 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (4/20/2013 6:09:00 AM)

    I thought the lost poem was actually retrieved and with a happy mind started reading this! But lo! You have made out another poem with a tenacious heart! Good, Valerie, i loved this lovely poem with excellent rhyme and rhythm. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 481 Points Danny Draper (4/5/2013 6:32:00 AM)

    A poem of strength and resilience defiant to the last. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,112 Points Diane Hine (3/27/2013 8:45:00 PM)

    An impassioned poem with a smashing last line! - I very much hope you intend to write a sequel. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Robinson (3/27/2013 5:18:00 PM)

    So cruel a poem. Who could do this. Fortunately it is just a poem. Or is it? (Report) Reply

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