Story Of Stillness Poem by Seema Aarella

Story Of Stillness

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"I had heard sometimes
The frivolous whispers
Of the wind, when it breathed
Carelessly in the quiet freedom
Of unpopulated still valley.

I had touched the skin
of moonlight with my palm,
While chasing fire flies
On a tranquil full moon night
In the paddy fields of my village

I had lent my heart's ears
To the revelling poppy buds
Dauntlessly asserting their
Individuality in the orchard
Rich with swarming variety,

I had seen through the groggy
Eyes of earth, the visible
Beauty of this brisk cosmos.
When early dews rinsed my face,
On a freezing winter morn.

I had heard the screams
Of hunger, seen famine of words,
And parched lifeless thoughts
When an emotional drought
Paralyzed my vigorous mind

I had seen with my inert eyes
The birth of a tender dream,
Youth of a private desire
And death of an aged love,
From a stone bench in the Leisure Park of life.

Monday, March 9, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: stillness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rakesh Bedi 18 July 2009

...... I had heard the screams..... till the end; too good for words!

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Dr Kamran Haider 09 March 2009

That is an amazing composition... Observation is the best tool a poet can use in it's own style... Looking beyond an ordinary mind can reach is known to be a blessing but one shud handle it with care... And you have done all justice here in this beautiful poem... Regards, Kamran

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Sadiqullah Khan 09 March 2009

Strangely You are contended with it, but it goes on. RElating nature to human miseries is a good theme 10

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Catrina Heart 09 March 2009

A fabulous meaningful composition Seema........poetically penned. I loved the imagery you painted and the choice of words.10+++++

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an excellent stillness there full of life

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