Strange Entity Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Strange Entity

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Why our love became strange entity?
Was it lacking honesty and of poor quality?
I have no answer but certainly it did good damage
It went out of control and shamed the age

We used to swear by god's name
That we shall remain together and one
No one would dare to separate us
That much confidence I had with trust

Some sort of tsunami struck our love land
We turned foes from known friend
He took vow not to see me again
It caused me heavy and unbearable pain

I was with you from childhood
The love groomed from neighborhood
I wished to be your partner forever
Now we are no where to it or near

Our ship struck midway in sea
That any body could observe or see
It is drifting and washed away to bank
Now whom to blame for it or thank?

We are same again and live separate
Except memory we have nothing to relate
God only know how much I sacrificed
Each word I fulfilled as promised

Can we not become same again?
Why to share grief and pain?
Love is certainly the thing to miss
It gives itching and tease

From now onward life will surely be a hell
There won't be anything left to tell
We shall cry alone in one corner
To miss each other as partner

Believe in me and count for honesty
We were together with the blessings from almighty
We can do it once again if you let go little
Things may improve and help to settle

Only lucky people get the full support
We were not unlucky to miss the port
Our ship may launch its journey again
Let there be cyclone or heavy rain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Hasmukh ji, you see love from a different angle. Love is ever so sweet and we need to hang on to it at any cost. It is a gem not to lose! ! Kumarendra Mallick, Hyderabad Jun 19,2012

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Deletekb great one

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I understand this, and questioned many times, but now I understand that when 2 people cannot teach each other for more, they have to separate and go on their own way. This goes for marriage partners, parents and children and so for friends also.

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Why our love became strange entity? Was it lacking honesty and of poor quality?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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